Hey guys. Soo sorry it took awhile, but this is the very predictable Chapter Three. Sorry, but I have an idea for the next chapter and it's gonna have to be in Rochelle's POV for it to work.
*IMPORTANT INFO*- Okay, so the blogging days are decided- I will blog mainly on Tuesdays and Thursdays. Maybe little blurbs in between, but nothing like related to this still nameless story. Or maybe on the weekends if I'm bored, I will post a sneak preview to the next Chapter. Since I am posting today, I might not post tomorrow (Tuesday). Unless I get some TOTALLY AWESOME feedback, I probably won't. Sorry I'm so wishy-washy. But you can pretty much guarantee there will be a post on Thursday.
Okay SHOUT OUT to everyone that has commented on my blog posts or on Lisi's blah-g saying how much they liked my story. You don't realize it, but it means alot. Also SHOUT OUT to my six lurvvley followers. You are AWESOME. SUPER AWESOME AMAZING SHOUT OUT to Emily* from Lisi's blah-g. She told something along the lines of this "Hey chella can you post more of your story cause it is really good." Thanks Em! That little comment inspired me to write chapter three THAT NIGHT. So I could get it to you faster. It's nice to know I have fans. (: Okay so enough of my chatter, let's get to Chapter Three!
Chapter 3
~Rochelle~
I was greeted with three swarming girls, all speaking at once.
"I saw sparklers and-"
"Was he cute and did he-"
"OMG! Did you guys kiss?"
"GUYS!" I yelled in my loudest voice, which created a slight sting in my throat. I couldn't take all of those questions at once. They instantly quieted.
"We ran around the beach with sparklers 'cause it was the last day of summer. Yes, he is super cute. And we did kiss... twice."
I smiled as they all sighed with envy. It had all been so amazing... us lying on the beach in the silence, against each other... kissing... it was like a dream come true.
"You kissed a boy?"
Jacqueline's voice was curious, not envious.
"Yeah, I did." I responded proudly. Even though Jacqueline was totally beautiful, I knew she had never kissed a boy. Well, she "doesn't like to talk about things like that", a.k.a "I don't have expirience and I don't want to seem stupid." Sure, boys had fawned over her from afar. But she was so icy, with her stick straight white-blonde hair, razor sharp features, cold blue eyes, and perfect runway strut, she intimidated a lot of people before she could blow them away.
But she didn't seem jealous at all. She just plopped on the couch and put her feet up. "Well, it's a good thing you'll never see him again."
I shook my head quickly like there was a bee buzzing in my ear. We would see each other again, he had pinky-swore. "Why is that a good thing?" I asked slowly, scared of her answer.
"Be-cause," she said, as if it were obvious. "If you guys became a thing, you'd have to tell him our secret. And he would tell other people, and we would be found. Understand now?" Her eyebrows were raised, like she was trying to explain something to a three-year-old.
My heart shattered. Well, that was an exaggeration. I mean, I just met the guy, I didn't love him her anything. I would live. But there was just something special about him.
"But-" I started.
"But nothing." she snapped, cutting me off. "Like it would matter, anyways. He probably doesn't think that much of you. Regardless, you can't see him anymore. Kay? Good."
I just stared blankly at her as she climbed of the couch and glided back to the kitchen. The rest of the girls went tot the bedroom. I just stoof there, in awe of how someone could be that mean. Not like there was anything I could do.
The alpha had spoken.
And as beta, I had to listen.
Sunday, February 21, 2010
Chapter Three and SHOUTOUTS!
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I grinned at my first-day-of-school-totally awesome-outfit. I wore a spring green halter top with white shorts, green wedges, and a diamond necklace I had gotten for my 15th birthday. Sure, nothing was designer (puh-lease. I wish.) but in the middle-class world, I would give the outfit a nine and a half. The outfit gave off a "I can still rock this summer 'till the temperature drops" vibe that I loved. I swiped on grey eyeliner, clear glodd, and rosy cheek tint to complete myself. Finished.
We now had a new place, which wasn't as great at the summer place, but still pretty good. The summer place was more modern Kate Moss style, and this was more cozy Ralph Lauren style. (What? Jacqueline leaves her magazines around, and sometimes there is nothing else to read!) I took a glass of water from the fridge and placed it on the island in the kitchen. With the flick of my wrist, the water effortlessly swayed under my power. I lifted the water out of the cup, which made a shapeless puddle in mid-air. I brought it over and poured the refreshment in my mouth. Sigh. The only use for that power was to get a drink when you were too lazy to lift the glass.
"Come on guys, we're going to be late!" shouted Jacqui, grabbing her car keys on her way out the door. Jamie, Hannah, and Cameron followed her, making last minute makeup additions before they stepped out in public. That's my girls. I smiled and followed them. We all piled into Jacqui's cherry-red Ferrari. My family wasn't rich, but her's sure was! She didn't even have her premit. We were going into sophomore year. Whatever.
I switched the dial on the radio so we could all listen to the radio station we loved. We sure did look good- five hot girls in a Ferarri, music blasting, our hair being swished back by the wind in a very flattering way. We made it seem like summer again. A group of three girls toting huge boy backpacks and matching baggy t-shirts that read "Save the Earth- It's the Only Planet With Chocolate" glared at us as we sped past them.
We pulled into one of the last parking spaces. The grassy area in front of the school was covered in all types of people- cheerleaders, jocks, drama kids, you name it. It was just like any other high school, except a lot bigger. I sighed and adjusted my top. Sophomore year, here I come.
"Formation!" Jacqui snapped.
I rolled my eyes as we went into a line that Jacqui insisted upon, although I thought we looked stupid.
Jacqui was in the middle, me and Jamie on the sides of her, and Cameron and Hannah on the sides of us.
We walked from the car to the grassy campus, stepping on the same foot with Jacqui one step ahead of us. Guys snicker-punched their buddies when we walked by, but we resumed our blank stare.
We entered the building which smelt like locker metal and pencil shavings, just like any other school. Seeing that Jacqui would trample anyone into her path to the grey tiles, they all pressed against the walls so we could get through. People whisper-envy-gossiped about the new girls (us). Sure, I thought we looked stupid, but apparently everyone else thought differently.
We rounded the corner to see a bunch of guys against a brown wall, comparing summer stories. I side-glanced at them. They had stopped to watch us. My side-glance met the most amazing pair of familiar bright green eyes.
I stopped in my tracks and stared at him. It was him.
The girls kept going for a few steps before noticing the gap in which I was supposed to be. They whipped around at the same time. Jamie, Hannah, and Cameron gasped. Jacqui's mouth just hung open in anger and disbelief. I had described him to them too well.
"Hey Roch." he murmured, running his hand through his curly black hair.
"Josh." I whispered.
Oh yes. Very dramalicious and VERY predictable. But there will be a very unpredictable twist coming in the next chapter. Ta ta till then!
xoxo,
Chella
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5 comments:
Oh my God, Chella! You're story is amazing, I just read the whole thing through. Out of all the girl's stories I've read off blogs and from Lisi's site, this one has to be one of the best!!! (not going to single out anybody, that would be kinda meanish)
It's weird though, because all people who write romance stories must think all the same things are romantic. In my story that I'm writing, the boy is described as being like the ocean and they do sparklers on the beach. Anyway, just though that was a quinky dink.
Love your story! Bye!
@Francesca- Haha thanks!! Yeah I think the beach is like the most ROMANTIC place ever and I LOVE the ocean.
Hey Chella! love your blog and your story! its good! Not typical know wat i mean? :)
Hey Chella :) I saw your comment on Lisi's blog and clicked on your name. I didn't know you had a blog, anyway I love your background. I'll try to check out your story later -Hannah
Thanks guys. :)
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